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Jean Marie Ward ([personal profile] jmward14) wrote2008-03-14 04:54 pm

Building the Internal World

Much as I've enjoyed the recent posts on [profile] fangs_fur_fey about picking your monster, the discussion that got my brain working this week centered on diversity.  Fantasy worlds, even the worlds of urban fantasy, generally resemble the world of 1930s movies.  All the people who matter are white, pretty and disabled only by their own preconceptions.  
I can see points on both sides of the issue.  When you're building detail into a world not your own, you have to cut corners or you wind up pulling a Proust.  And frankly, there are too many other white, middle class writers working on the same kinds of things to expect a publisher--even one who's done well by your work in the past--to pry the manuscript from your clutching fingers or hack it from your computer.
But if you create a world that ignores what's happening around you without establishing a good reason for the divergence you will ultimately alienate readers.  It happened to me, and I'm usually the dimmest reading bulb in the box.
A few years before the current fashion in shifters got hot, I read two volumes in an intense, sexy werewolf saga.  I liked it a lot, but one thing really bothered me.  All the werewolves were white supermodels--men and women--complete with the cheekbones and piercing gray eyes.  When I had the chance to interview the writer, I asked her if she planned to set future novels in other parts of the world where the shifters would, presumably, display different physical characteristics.  She said, no.  They all looked like that.
Somehow I wasn't surprised book number two turned out to be the last in that series.  Nobody ever raised the race issue in their reviews, but...
But how do you get into the head of someone of a different race?  How does someone with a disability cope?  Sociology and medical texts don't cut it for me.  Too clinical.  They don't tell you how it feels.  But nosy as I am, I have a hard time getting too personal with people I don't know, especially when the questions involve delicate, often painful issues.
Which is why "The Vision Thing" by Stephen Kuusisto in today's New York Times feels like such a gift.  There's a reason to read Op/Ed pages after all.  Who knew?

[identity profile] b-sheridan.livejournal.com 2008-03-15 02:33 am (UTC)(link)
Articles like the link you posted are definitely a great help in portraying characters with disabilities or backgrounds we have no experience of. When writing about someone of a different culture or gender I've always tried to draw a lot on situations that make use of universal emotions.

We may not get things 100% right but if we do our best and go at it in a respectful manner we can keep our readers in our fictional worlds.

One of the authors who most made me want to write was Susan Johnson with her Braddock-Black series. I grew up on stereotypical "Cowboys & Indians" and I was blown away by her Native American characters because they were "real people" not Hollywood stereotypes. She had incredible cultural detail that I was eager to read because she made me love the characters and connect with them on an emotional level.

It takes a lot of work and effort to find those details that make your "different" characters believable and it seems to me that the author you mentioned who was satisfied with the idea that "They all look like that" was taking the easy way out.

[identity profile] jmward14.livejournal.com 2008-03-15 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh! I'll have to check out that series. Thanks for the heads up.
Yeah, you try your best. That's all you can do. I think readers respect the effort. At least, I hope they do. :-)
Hugs,
Jean Marie

[identity profile] b-sheridan.livejournal.com 2008-03-15 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
I started with the second book in the series Silver Flame then read the first--Blaze. I liked the second better :) The next one Forbidden was pretty cool too. I heartily recommend Pure Sin too it's a standalone but also features a very cool Native American hero.

The very coolest thing to history geek me is Johnson's footnotes. I don't think her later books have those. I imagine someone at the publisher said--"nobody wants that in their fiction".

Thanks, from the Kuusisto's

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