It's All Diane's Fault

[jmward14]

Diane Whiteside's, that is.  I'm back in Rewrite Hell.  Oh well, anything for a better book.  (She says through gritted teeth.  LOL)  I wrote about the issue for my bimonthly blog at Fantasy & Enchantment.  Check it out if you want to see the source of my woe.  You know, at times like these, I really wish I could figure out how to make the books write themselves.
Hugs and grins,
Jean Marie
*the blogging delinquent*

Comments

[hutch0.livejournal.com]

Absolutely send me the tweaked first chapter. I'm enjoying the book, but I'm having trouble finding more than a few minutes a day to sit down with it right now. BTW, did you just want an opinion, or do you want the full copy-edit service?
Big Hugs.

[jmward14.livejournal.com]

{{{{hutch0}}}} The doc will follow via your bt account. Just looking for your thoughts, especially on the areas where the characterization storytelling falters. This book is <>so not ready for copy edits. LOL
Hugs and big, big thanks,
Jean Marie